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The Outpost
by Meg
new comments Doom 2, single player
released, doom(2).exe
screenshot #1screenshot #2screenshot #3
27.03.2018

Description:

I'm new to mapping, this is my very first doom map, so I'm sure it's not too great.... This is supposed to be a tech base on the moon, but parts are being taken over by hellish dimensions. Any feedback would be appreciated! :)


grouchbag writes:(new) 19.06.2017, 02:02 GMT+1

The pictures are a little dark, hard to tell. What I will say is if it 's not the best, keep up making maps, you'll get better. Best of luck to you!

bzzrak writes:(new) 19.06.2017, 17:21 GMT+1
edited 19.06.2017, 17:23 GMT+1

Hi. Your WAD reminds me of my own first WAD a bit too much (that one sucked btw).

Some friendly advice:

1. Use more different wall textures and detailing, just TEKWALL1 is ugly. You know, some computer terminals, windows, all that.
2. The EXITDOOR repeating vertically looks horrible, also it would glitch in vanilla. Please make it NOT repeat, check out the end of E1M1 to see how it's done. :]
3. Your ceiling lights have a pattern, but the weird-angled walls "cut" it and it looks ugly. Also, on the 2nd shot, the cyberdemon's head on the door texture is cut and it looks ugly.

Keep at it. The 1st shot in fact does look kind of cute.
Your first maps will suck, no getting around that. But you WILL become a better mapper, eventually, if you keep making those sucky maps.

P.S. ignore the spamming asshead.

grouchbag writes:(new) 20.06.2017, 07:40 GMT+1

Bzzrak:You hit the nail on the head!

grouchbag writes:(new) 26.06.2017, 09:18 GMT+1

Bratfag, are you aware you're breaking the law?Thought not.Harassment, illegal, and judging from what you said about jumping out a window, that's encouraging suicide, also against the law.What would not be against the law is if you had sense enough to shut your mouth.Not only the one in your head, but the one on your arse.I believe you're rather jealous bc you're banned from forums.LOL

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Schism writes:(new) 29.01.2018, 04:26 GMT+1

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